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[flamingsword]

I think maybe I'm trying to put too much into the poems, that they move too fast per line. So either I need to limit the subject, or extend the length. Yarg. I should find a poetry-writing comm for this stuff. :| Maybe when I'm a bit better at it.

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[rens-sanctuary.livejournal.com]

I think you're doing well with them. I would, given the choices, stick to a central idea over extending the length, personally.